In the last class, Rab gave us final feedback about our first essay. We should not write an essay through question and answer to it because writing is often limited to specific words. I used this way, so I decided not to make same mistake. Rab told us mistakes that most of us made in these  classes and tutorial. Some of them are what I made. Therefore, I think that receiving feedback is important to improve my writing skills. I hope that I will not make same mistakes and receive new advice.